Okay, so the bronze angles brought then to San Francisco and they are trying to find the old man that use to rule the sea, Nereus because they could ask him one question. So, they brought Percy to a store and made him look gangster so he could "fit in" with the other people. Nereus is was a homeless man, so they found a bunch of people who were homeless and Zoe said, he smells...different, you will know. So, Percy walked around the people trying to find Nereus. When he smells a horrible smell, like of dead fish, seaweed, and a bunch of gross things that has to do with the sea. So, Percy grabbed him and they plunged into the sea. That's when Nereus was turning into a bunch of sea creatures. Then he wondered why Percy wasn't drowning. "I am son of Poseidon." That didn't make Nereus any happier, "I was hear first!" So, Percy finally grabbed him and Nereus decided to answer one of Percy's question. Percy wanted to ask a ton of questions, but instead asked, "Where is the monster we are looking for?" Nereus said, "That's a easy one, he's right here." Then he turned into a gold fish and dived into the sea. Come to find out the monster is Bessie, the cow fish that Percy helped earlier in the book. Then Dr. Thorn and some of his helpers came and attacked Percy, Thalia, Zoe, and Grover. But Percy IM's Mr. D and asks for help nicely and so he did. Which got them a couple of hours. They want to get Bessie, so, they sent Grover with Bessie to safety so Luke and his minions couldn't get Bessie.
I could really visualize when Mr. D helps them and raps vines around Dr. Thorn and makes it so his minions are drunk. Like a bunch of drunk guys walking in circles and acting dumb.
Tuesday, March 9, 2010
A really bad smelling Guy
Wrote by Tiffany Rose at 5:08 AM
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3 comments:
haha...I like how I can even visualize the scene using your description. The words you use are vivid-- minions, for example. I picture small, sort of insignificant people who all look about the same and follow each other's leads. And to think of them drunk with no place to go...that's funny!!
Good job describing your visualization and keeping your reader updated on your book!
eww kind of reminds me of mitchel!! lol Dude he smelled like rotten onions yesterday!! Gross!!
Haha that's great Ambur and Thank you Mrs. Philips :)
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