Party with the Gods

So, they leave to see the Gods. The Gods have to decide what to do with Bessie. But, Poseidon swears to keep her save in a aquarium in Mount Olympus. But then, they have to decide what they are going to do with PErcy and Thalia. One of them are going to be part of the prophesy. So some of the Gods ant them to die, but others don't. Thalia is going to be 16 in 2 days, but decides to join the hunters, then she will not turn 16.
Since they stop Bessie from being sacrificed, they threw a party, but this party is like the King of all parties. The music, you only hear what you want to hear. Everyone hears what they want to hear. Awesome :). Then Percy dances with Annabeth and he gets to talk to his dad. Also, Annabeths mom.
When he gets back to Camp, he meets up with Nico, sadly he to,d him what happened to his sister. Then Nico gets mad at Percy for not saving her. Even though he tried. That's when the skeleton monsters appear. Niceo, is frustrated and starts yelling NO NO NO!!! With his hands over his ears and the ground seems to crack open and they fall into it. This is when the found out that Nice is the son of Hades. (Which I had a feeling him and Bianca was since we met them.) So Percy might not be of the prophecy.

I could really see a little boy standing their, hand over ears, screaming NO, then just some big crack in the ground sucking in the skeletons.

Holy Cow!!!

Okay, so the monsters are comeing up the mountain, and when they reach the top, Percy, and Zoe, and Thalia will die. Well, not Artemis, because she's immortal. When out of no where, Annabeth's dad appears, in a plane, firing gun shots at the monsters. He makes sure they are safe, and comes down. But this is not a happy part. Oh no...when Zoe got bite by Ladon, it poisoned her. Sadly, she dies in Artemis's arms, but Artemis makes her a Constellation the sky, so they will always remember her.

I can really see when Annabeth's dad comes flying in with in a airplane, one of those old fashion ones, and shooting down at the monster and a bunch of monsters falling.

Holding up millions of pounds, would not be fun.

Okay, they meet up with the General, Artemis, Annabeth, and Luke. Come to find out, the General is Zoe's fathers, also known as Atlas. He was the one who was holding up the sky for centuries now, and he tricked Annabeth to hold it up, but she wa only a half-blood and is not as strong as a immortal, so that's why Artemis took it from her. (Also, it makes you get gray hair, if your not immortal) So, Annabeth has streaks of gray in her hair. See, if the sky touched the world the world would end or something like that, so that's why someone has to hold it up. But they need to trick Atlas into holding up the sky now, so Percy takes the sky from Artemis and they all start fighting each other. Percy is in a lot of pain, because holding up the sky is millions of pounds. When Atemis gets Atlas to come close enough to Percy, Percy drops the sky on Atlas's shoulders.
Thalia is fighting Luke and he is on the edge of the cliff now, and Thalia doesn't know what to do. But Percy stops her from wanting to help him and he bumps into her and he falls off the cliff. At the edge of the cliff, is a bunch of monsters tring to get up the mountain as fast as possible.

I have a prediction. I hope to see that they find Bianca. that would be great :)

Poor Zoe...

Okay so when they get up Atlas's mountain more, and they find Ladon, the dragon that had realy bad breath and like 100 heads. It protected the Golden Apple Tree. They also found Zoe' sisters, well the sisters don't call Zoe their sister because she is a hunter. So they threaten to wake up Ladon if they don't leave. Yet, Zoe isn't afraid and wakes Ladon up herself. She tells Thalia and Percy to make a run for it and they did. That's when the dragon bites into Zoe's side, and she cries out in pain. As much as Percy wants to help, they can't because not even the almighty Hercules could beat this creature. When Zoe get's away, they help her up the mountain, come to find the General.


Okay, something I could really picture, is the dragon with like 50 heads or so sleeping rapped up around this apple tree. I can see the apples on the tree being like a gold solid apple. That would taste horrible...haha

They meet Anabeth's Dad

Okay, so once they get away for Dr. Thorn and his minions, they need to find a place to get to the mountain. Percy remember that Annabeth's dad is in San Fransisco. So they go to his house and borrow a car. They drive to the mountain and the car ends up exploding, but luckly they got out of the car right in time, well they jump out. So, they have to walk up the mountain. When they look over the cliff and see Luke's boat. They better hurry. They walk and walk up the mountain.

I could really see them driving fast Thalia says GET OUT OF THE CAR really fast an they have to jump. Then they can't find Zoe but she was just on the other side of the car, safe.

A really bad smelling Guy

Okay, so the bronze angles brought then to San Francisco and they are trying to find the old man that use to rule the sea, Nereus because they could ask him one question. So, they brought Percy to a store and made him look gangster so he could "fit in" with the other people. Nereus is was a homeless man, so they found a bunch of people who were homeless and Zoe said, he smells...different, you will know. So, Percy walked around the people trying to find Nereus. When he smells a horrible smell, like of dead fish, seaweed, and a bunch of gross things that has to do with the sea. So, Percy grabbed him and they plunged into the sea. That's when Nereus was turning into a bunch of sea creatures. Then he wondered why Percy wasn't drowning. "I am son of Poseidon." That didn't make Nereus any happier, "I was hear first!" So, Percy finally grabbed him and Nereus decided to answer one of Percy's question. Percy wanted to ask a ton of questions, but instead asked, "Where is the monster we are looking for?" Nereus said, "That's a easy one, he's right here." Then he turned into a gold fish and dived into the sea. Come to find out the monster is Bessie, the cow fish that Percy helped earlier in the book. Then Dr. Thorn and some of his helpers came and attacked Percy, Thalia, Zoe, and Grover. But Percy IM's Mr. D and asks for help nicely and so he did. Which got them a couple of hours. They want to get Bessie, so, they sent Grover with Bessie to safety so Luke and his minions couldn't get Bessie.


I could really visualize when Mr. D helps them and raps vines around Dr. Thorn and makes it so his minions are drunk. Like a bunch of drunk guys walking in circles and acting dumb.

Bronze Angels

Okay so first, When the leave the junk yard, they end up in a empty dessert. They reach a cliff that has a river at the bottom, and they find a canoe renting place. They leave some drachmas at the counter, because no-one was their and they put a IUO letter with it. They have two boats, and some naiads helped them out. Even though Percy could of done it but the naiads were their to help. So the naiads brought them as far as they could bring them, because their was a giant dam, one of Annabeth's personal favorites. So they went up their because their was a parking lot and stuff for them to eat, because it is a tourist sight. So when they got up their, they see two Bronze Angel statues, a give to Zeus, from Athena. People would rub the Angels toe, because they thought it was good luck. They were all going to the snack bar when Percy hears a moo sound. o he told them to go ahead and he went to the edge of the dam. When he looked down, he cow-fish creature was in the river (the one he saved earlier in the book). It was mooing and looked like it was trying to tell him something. When he hears a noise and looks behind him to see the skeleton-zombies. That's when he ran. Into a tourist group. Into a elevator. When he got off the Tourist guide took of her sunglasses and had stormy gray eyes, and said to Percy, "There is always a way out for those clever enough to find it." Athena, Annabeth's mom, she was trying to give him like a clue. So anyway, Percy has to find Grover, Thalia, and Zoe. He gets to the snack bar and tell them it is time to go. That's when the Zombie-Skeletons find them, and surround them. So Grover starts a food fight which gives them time to get out of their. When they get outside, they are next to the bronze angles and the zombies circle them. Anetha gave Percy a clue and he knew what to do. He tells Thalia to pray to her dad (Zeus) Even though she thinks he won't listen. But he does, and the Bronze Angles come alive and saves them.

I predict that The Angles will get them to the place they are trying to get, or at least a safe place, then the will find a way to get their. I also think that Thalia and her dad will become closer. Maybe...